In response to the feedback, I made significant changes to enhance the overall design. I focused on reworking the thicknesses and curves of the letters, adjusting their spacing, and connecting the “O” and “W”. I found that linking the last two letters created a more harmonious flow compared to connecting the first two. It effectively conveyed the essence of the word “FLOW”, mimicking the smooth movement associated with a sine wave, reminiscent of the VAIO logo,
To infuse playful elements into the design, I explored how the circular motif in the “F” could be echoed in the “W”. I wanted to explore repetition and unity within the logo.
I also shortened the “L” in this iteration and introduced a slight slant at the bottom, enhancing its visual balance and contributing to the overall dynamism of the design.